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Re: Storyline

Post by Hunata on Tue Sep 08, 2015 11:00 am

I was mostly referring to the fact that a small army was gathered around a returning Captain. With the gate being formed and all those Shinigami running around, I figured Inazuma would have sensed at least a little of Spiritual Reiatsu emanating from that direction.

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Post by Setoku on Tue Sep 08, 2015 7:37 pm

Well if you wanna be a buzzkill like that, go ahead. Chujiro can sense it too, but eh, he's too lazy to care xD Besides... Former Captain - Of Second Squad no Less - too much for him - The captain part anyway. If he showed up and saw just who it was, he'd prolly pee his pants xD
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Post by Hunata on Tue Sep 08, 2015 7:41 pm

Yeah, I wasn't going to mention anything after thinking about it. I plan on posting today, just haven't found time for it. I remembered that especially strong characters in Bleach Canon usually have their spiritual pressure go undetected due to their immense power, so I'll he shooting a long those lines. Don't worry.

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Post by Setoku on Tue Sep 08, 2015 7:45 pm

Eh... Normally, yes, they do. But Kurome isn't here to play nice or hide himself. He wants the current captain of Second Squad out, so he's making himself felt. Honestly, when a Captain amps up their Reiatsu, I've always been curious if we could feel it where our characters were? Like knees bending and junk? Lol xD

And if people think Kurome of all things is strong.... Wait until his Daddy shows up one day xD
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Re: Storyline

Post by Hunata on Wed Sep 09, 2015 5:22 am

Damn, so does anyone see anything in my posts that they think I could change? Improve on, I guess I should say. Like, I see your posts, Setoku, then Lacrimosa's posts, and I'm like, all self conscious about mine xD

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Post by Setoku on Wed Sep 09, 2015 6:56 am

Your posts are actually quite well done, in all honesty. You don't have the rambling or over explanation tendacy's of most multi-para rpers, or the short and to the point brief explanations of duelist style rper's (like myself, or Stray.) I mean, like all of us, ie me and lac, you have a few points where you seem to be rushed, or spoke of something you had little understanding of so merely gloss over, and the few typos everyone has

Overall, though, I find your posts well crafted and enjoyable to read. Lac's as well. To be honest, I get all self conscious when I read over all the posts xD. I'm like "huh... I thought I was the skilled rp veteran.... Awww q.q" lol.
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Re: Storyline

Post by Hunata on Wed Sep 09, 2015 7:04 am

Setoku wrote: Overall, though, I find your posts well crafted and enjoyable to read. Lac's as well. To be honest, I get all self conscious when I read over all the posts xD. I'm like "huh... I thought I was the skilled rp veteran.... Awww q.q" lol.

That's how I felt! xD Thanks though. I appreciate the feed back. Everyone here is awesome. Wish Stray would get in on the action though. ;O

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Re: Storyline

Post by Setoku on Wed Sep 09, 2015 2:40 pm

Oh she will! I brought her into this dark abyss known as RP, I can also take her out for being lazy about it too :o
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Post by Lacrimosa on Wed Sep 09, 2015 3:53 pm

You have awakened something bad in me. Whut? I wasn't supposed to put any effort into this rp. screw y'all. what happened to my lazy rp retirement.
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Post by Hunata on Wed Sep 09, 2015 5:54 pm

Damn. That was quite the revelation. So are Chujiro and Inazuma directly related? Cousins? And was Kaetrina disgraced for her choice of man, maybe a reason Inazuma never noticed Chujiro?

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Post by Setoku on Wed Sep 09, 2015 7:54 pm

They would technically be cousins, I suppose. And she was disgraced for taking "Shibata" a servant name, over keeping her "Shiba" name, yes.
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Post by Hunata on Wed Sep 09, 2015 8:13 pm

Laminated to ask because my next post hinges on said information. I'll have a post up in an hour or two.

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Re: Storyline

Post by straywolf174 on Thu Sep 10, 2015 2:34 am

I think that's natural for any writer to want to better themselves. I like to think me and Setoku helped out each other alot as far as certain writing styles; He taught me better organization and plotting (kind of,) and i taught him how to paint a better scene. Though, i still think the flea could use a crap ton of improvement. Really, i guess my point is we all learn from expeirience and esposure to other people's skills - not to mention flaws. Ballancing those together strengthens any grand roleplayer. So, my advice would be to write as much as you can with as many people possible.

Edit: Leave it to the crappy mod to not realise the next page...
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Post by Setoku on Sat Sep 12, 2015 12:13 am

how about instead of bragging, you get into this RP Stray? Gonna make us run out of options here. I mean asphalt has former Captain Urizita in your barracks, and Former Captain Kurome is at the gates!!! Also, remember. You were ichi level until I got a hołd of you. Ichi level and insta attacker! But first came me, who against all odds took you on as his student, and taught you the arts, then came Lyonin who taught you
the..... "Romantic" (and kinky Wink with you involved in it, anyway, I'm sure.... Craaaazy.) side. And thanks to us, you learned mad battle skills (Me.) and mad descriptive skills. (Lyonin.) so what stands before us is... Our legacy of work. Your welcome :P (this took years, I kid you all not! Years!!!)

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Re: Storyline

Post by Hunata on Sat Sep 12, 2015 3:53 am

Setoku wrote:(this took years, I kid you all not! Years!!!)


Lol I think we have all been there and done that.

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Re: Storyline

Post by straywolf174 on Sun Sep 13, 2015 3:26 am

Shut the hell up flea, I was not THAT bad. Though severely lacking experience , not at all so horrid. Besides, i'm not exactly active nor will I be without a laptop or secure internet. Plus, I think I've already covered multiple times that my Android is busted and my health is diminishing. How bout' you actually stay on here instead of abandoning everything like you did with Youkai, huh?! I'm doing my best just to reply to you're distressed pm's and the occasional posts. Do you WANT me to give you a crappy reply? Because I will. Don't tempt me!
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Post by Setoku on Mon Sep 14, 2015 3:07 am

Hmmm... Not THAT bad, you say.... -Rubs chin- if the computer I was using then still... Worked. Miss thôse logs. Ah well. But... Trust me. Hunata is right, we were all there.... You were just more recent Stray. Still... Me and Lyonin sure did good. Second best student ever. There's something!
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Re: Storyline

Post by straywolf174 on Wed Sep 16, 2015 1:45 pm

Why is it my husband fascinates you so...?
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Post by Setoku on Wed Sep 16, 2015 4:41 pm

Because of our secret love affai---- I mean.... Errr, cuz he's cool. Yeah, cool <.<
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Re: Storyline

Post by straywolf174 on Wed Sep 16, 2015 10:36 pm

*Gives a warning growl* Know your place...
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Post by Hunata on Thu Oct 08, 2015 7:46 am

Hey guys. Sorry I've been inactive. No internet at the house for a while now. Should have it this weekend. Been using my phone for stuff and it sucks so bad. (Nokia Lumia first gen.) I'll post this weekend definitely when my internet is back. So far I;ve actually tried to post twice, but have since had an error once and the other time I actually had a decent block of text, got a text, and the page refreshed.... Kind of sucked the effort out of me xD

Sorry again.

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Post by straywolf174 on Thu Oct 08, 2015 4:47 pm

It's fine, Hunata-san. We all have our days. A recent change in living arrangements has me trying to find a new schedule, so you certainly aren't the only one. Though, inactivity isn't as much of a suprise for me, lol.

Oh, and for you as well as other roleplayers I'm still planning out those...plans...ugh, point is I haven't forgotten so just hold tight, m'kay?!
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Re: Storyline

Post by Setoku on Thu Oct 08, 2015 10:29 pm

....Young people... Always on the move >.> -Says guy who moved four times in the span of this year-
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Post by straywolf174 on Fri Oct 09, 2015 11:40 am

Well despite the upcoming move on December being the last, I've had at least ten this year...so, yep. You people wonder why I struggle so much with this. Still, damn Setoku, the hell happened?! You rob a bank without me?!
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